TV advert - final feedback

Scott, some good work produced here and within your group, you have created an effective re-branding adverting concept and a well-produced TV advert.

In regards to unit 2 - Communication Skills for Creative Media Production (pitch and presentation):
You were able to use appropriate techniques to extract information from written sources with some precision and presented a media production report which conveys relevant information.
Your pitch was interesting and I thought that you conveyed the information about your re-branding idea and employed forms of address in your pitch to communicate ideas. The pitch was good and you deployed and managed technology to pitch a media production proposal.
Some changes were made based on initial feedback with occasional beneficial effects.

In regards to unit 30: Advertisement Production for Television:
Currently you have not yet submitted your TV advert analysis to your blog and this needs to be addressed ASAP.
Working within your group, you were able originate and develop an idea for a TV advertisement showing some imagination and with only occasional assistance. The advert demonstrated a good understanding of conventions in TV adverts and it was clear that you were able to produce a TV advertisement to a good standard showing some imagination and with only occasional assistance.
Your evaluation was also good and you were able to comment on your own TV advertisement production work with some appropriate use of subject terminology.